Thursday, October 14, 2010

Mistakes of the opinion essay


  1. Famous people make much money.
  2. The fame gives you a lot of fans and win importants awards.
  3. Famous people have escape the paparazzis and his fans criticise his bad films.
  4. On the one hand, live in La Llagosta have a lot of advantages.
  5. There aren't hospitals in the town.
  6. Living in La LLagosta is positive because you know old the people.
  7. La LLagosta is a relaxed place.
  8. I don't like live in La LLagosta.
  9. This is the reason why the people goes to the hospital in Mollet.
  10. The town is little, also has transport public.
  11. It's a little town becuase don't have a cinema.
  12. I live in La Llagosta since 16 years, and is funny.